Messed up recount

• LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount.
• LI: to evaluate writing samples using the PBS writing rubric.
• LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount.

This week for writing I had to use Mr Wongs Messed up recount, In this recount I had to fix the words that are meant to be either Past, Present or Future. For writing we had to fix up the words in the fourth pharagraph.

This week I had to read the fourth pharagraph and see if there are any verbs or anything using the past, Present of Future. The present means during, The Future means after and the past means before, these are the meanings of present, future & past.